In this age of personal branding and virtual knowledge, we
all struggle with how to best describe our value, and the talents and abilities
we bring to the party. And as we know instinctively, no amount of hyperbole or
word inflation will mask our true character to people we know and who know us.
Honesty, authenticity, and simplicity are the rules of the day when it comes to
describing ourselves, our values and, most important, our value.
With this in mind, I have taken some time to enumerate words
and phrases that should be eliminated from our lexicon and the written words in
profiles and resumes. The envelope, please:
“Seasoned.” The word may be analogous to long experience,
but let’s face it, you are not a piece of meat or fish. It’s a good word to use
in gastronomy but not to describe your experience, value, accomplishments and
career track record. A better alternative is “experienced,” “tested,”
“accomplished,” or “veteran.”
“Results Driven.” The sad fact is that the term “results
driven” has been overused and abused. Everyone is results driven and many
hiring managers now look askance at the term. So don’t use it. A better
alternative may be “focused on accomplishing the task at hand,” “focused on
achieving business objectives,” or “driven by strategy and business goals.”
“Team player.” It is a given. Unless you are not working,
virtually every job requires people to work in teams or at least with one other
person. And hiring managers tend to assume that if you have been successful at
a job that you are able to work well with others. Possible ways of indicating
that you are a team player, is to use terms like “diplomatic,” “tactful,” “able
to excel under high pressure,” and “patient and resilient.” Another surefire
method is to actually describe a project where you led a successful team. Keep
it short, sweet, and succinct.

"Proven." Proven is an important descriptive word to employ
but by itself is an empty promise. If
you have a skill that has been verified in practice, give evidence. Tell a
brief story of the “proven” attribute. An example might be “led a team of 13
people in the successful development of an application to automate the
validation of source code, ” or “managed a team of six to produce the company’s
48-page annual report to shareholders, which was awarded a ‘Best of Annual’
award by the IR1 Association.”
“Top flight.” Generally a term of performance, “top flight”
connotes “high achiever,” “top caliber,” or “pinnacle of human performance.” If
in fact you are at the top rank in your profession, say it in a way that is
evidentiary, such as, “recognized as the top Hadoop coder by XYZ company for
‘project take off,’” or “awarded an LMN Award for best critical business
writing.” In this way you have given demonstrable qualification of your skill
set.
“Self Starter.” Unless you are the new Nissan Leaf, leave
the term behind. Hiring managers and HR folks want visible proof. Simply saying
it is not sufficient. Like a defendant, you need to present the evidence in the
form of an impeccable statement like, “initiated the revamp of the widget
manufacturing process that save the company 20% on raw material costs.” You get
the idea.
“Perfectionist.” Gold at 24 carats is pure gold and perfect.
We all strive for perfection, but no one is perfect. So lose the term and
describe what value you bring to the table instead of the word “perfectionist.”
“Flexible.” Unless you are made of neoprene, provng
flexibility could be painful. If, however, your thinking is flexible and you
are able to easily adapt to changing environments or new conditions, you will
likely want to visibly show how you have done so. Here is an example: “developed successful strategy for
communicating last minute CEO transition that resulted in favorable news
coverage and a sustained share price.”
“Trustworthy.” If you are pledging for the next rank in Boy
Scouts, “trustworthy” is worthy. However, on a resume, it could beg the
question. Another way of demonstrating trust is to note that you have
previously held a security clearance from the Government (If you have) or
simply to not worry about it unless you are applying for a job where it is an
essential requirement such as “security officer” or “bank teller.” The fact is,
unless the job is in the “security” domain, it need not be noted and can be
handled in the interview.